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The pool water splashed.

The outside emitted a hazy sepia color
Screaming across the water’s surface.

The concave roof above encased its occupants.

They drifted arbitrarily.

Some laid across the edge of the basin
Spewing nonsense in form of words,
Seeping from the roofs of their mouths.

Oblong shadows flew momentarily
Through the wafting air
Charging themselves into unprotected faces.

The restroom door, a safe house,
A sanctuary from these interferences,
Stood nearby.

My water stained sole
Collided with the sheen surface.

A swift movement combined my digit
With

The parched lips meeting halfway along an irreversible barrier between two isometric life forms.
Her momentary scent clung to a slender neck,
Unable to separate itself from a predetermined fate.
An echo whispering naïve promises.

The blood leaked onto the white tarnished tiles.

A tainted stitch, affixed to a wounded source.
An impulsive kiss, unfolded beyond two futures.
Unrealistic linkage allied in its escape from memory.

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The assignment

My creative writing teacher had us do a little activity....here is what he told us to do:

First Step

Think of the worst thing that has happened to you. Write about it, in either a poem a short story an essay whatever....BUT don't use the personal I, Me, Us, etc. AND don't use any emotion/emotional words.

After 15 min or so Second Step

You may use the personal I, Me, Us, etc.

After 10 min or so Third Step

STOP MID SENTENCE
then go to your next sentence and begin to discuss the BEST thing that has ever happened to you. Don't worry it is supposed to appear jumbled. (Without using personal I and without using any emotion words)

After 10 or so min. Fourth Step

You may use personal I.

After 5 min or so. Fifth Step

Stop. Begin to connect the Worst event and the Best event WITHOUT bluntly stating the connection. Explicitly discuss in your writing how the two are related. You may use personal I and emotion words.

This was the activity and this is what i came up with ^^



This is for :iconthesoulasylum:'s literature contest located here [link]

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:iconimagineccentricity:
~imagineccentricity Sep 18, 2009  Student General Artist
very pretty and i want to try doing this for myself!
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:iconthepolishyogi:
*thepolishyogi Sep 19, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
its quite entertaining :D :D
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:iconimagineccentricity:
~imagineccentricity Sep 19, 2009  Student General Artist
i bet thanks for sharing! :]
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